Let’s get writing at Liverpool John Moores

Tomorrow I am starting a 24 hour residential workshop with Sport staff at Liverpool John Moores University. They won a university prize for achievement and decided to spend the money on improving their publications track records. I will be using similar handouts to those I used on 25th September last year (see previous posts) but I will also be using this  new workshop task Edit this (449 downloads) . Here are the slides I used Liverpool slides (595 downloads) .  I hope you enjoy looking at how many errors you can see in this and suggesting how you would improve the text!